These lesson categories will take you through a year of better writing. With 52 lessons to work with, jump in anywhere.
- Week 1: How to Look at Your Own Work Toggle
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- Week 1: How to Look at Your Own Work
- If you’ve got writing prompt exercises lying around, take things to the next level. Jumpstart all your drabbles or snippets with this lesson.
- Begin Week 1
- Week 2: Bio into Fiction Toggle
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- Week 2: Bio into Fiction
- This lesson illustrates why you don't want to tell the truth and nothing but the truth in telling your fictionalized tale.
- Begin Week 2
- Week 3: Character Arc Tools - Worksheet & Map Toggle
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- Week 3: Character Arc Tools - Worksheet & Map
- Help for planning your characters with worksheets and maps. This works for linear or visual writing styles.
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- Week 4: Craft Basics - the Big Half Dozen & Some Little Stuff Toggle
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- Week 4: Craft Basics - the Big Half Dozen & Some Little Stuff
- This is an example lesson
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- Week 5: Who's On First? Toggle
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- Week 5: Who's On First?
- Now what’s so important about using an antecedent? The importance is in how these words are left off or misused in writing.
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- Week 6: How to Be More Sense-ative Toggle
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- Week 6: How to Be More Sense-ative
- If you show with senses rather than with extra exposition that can be removed, you begin writing a faster, tighter read: right now.
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- Week 7: The Special Case of Dialogue and Senses Toggle
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- Week 7: The Special Case of Dialogue and Senses
- Surprise: the best way to use Dialogue Attributes (speech tags) is not to tell the reader someone said something.
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- Week 8: The Pitfalls of Under and Overwriting Toggle
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- Week 8: The Pitfalls of Under and Overwriting
- In this lesson, we’ll look at examples of over and under writing and ferret out a ‘weak verb’ tendency that most novices fall into using.
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- Week 9: How To Show It, When To Tell It Toggle
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- Week 9: How To Show It, When To Tell It
- By showing your reader scenes, you'll always get someone to turn a page. Telling (reporting) everything to your readers, page after page, might disengage them.
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- Week 10: Reader Feeder & Information Dumps Toggle
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- Week 10: Reader Feeder & Information Dumps
- Get your story info to the reader by letting the story reveal (via characters actions, reactions and dialog) the why and how of their backstory.
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- Week 11: Lying, Stealing and Cheating Toggle
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- Week 11: Lying, Stealing and Cheating
- You want to begin but you’re not sure how. Here are three very sneaky ways to get your writing going.
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- Week 12: Opening with Intensity Toggle
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- Week 12: Opening with Intensity
- Here’s a tip: finding that intense opening in what you already have is as important as struggling to write one to begin with.
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- Week 13: What to Write About? Toggle
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- Week 13: What to Write About?
- ‘What should I write?’ Choosing your own story is one idea, but that material needs to be filled in with high-grade fiction.
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- Week 14: A Dozen Ways to Start a Short Story Toggle
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- Week 14: A Dozen Ways to Start a Short Story
- How many possible ways can you start a story? Or a scene for that matter? Are there tricks to starting? We help with that here.
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- Week 15: What is a Story Arc? Toggle
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- Week 15: What is a Story Arc?
- Arcs happen all over the place in fiction. Characters have arcs. Scenes should as well. The overall story has the biggest arc of all.
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- Week 16: Writing With Words That Aren't Yours Toggle
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- Week 16: Writing With Words That Aren't Yours
- Search for phrases that are filler. Words that are strings of automatic sayings, hooked to your writing like boxcar after boxcar.
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- Week 17: When Your Words Don't Make the Best Impression Toggle
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- Week 17: When Your Words Don't Make the Best Impression
- We all want our words to sound the best. But, sometimes trying too hard (being too writer-ly) makes for poor writing.
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- Week 18: Hunt for Run-on Clauses Toggle
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- Week 18: Hunt for Run-on Clauses
- Get out the red pen! This time we’re adding a little something to avoid the dreaded run-on clause.
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- Week 19: Running on About Run-ons Toggle
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- Week 19: Running on About Run-ons
- Here, using three simple tests, we work with the over use conjunctions, prepositions, and commas.
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- Week 20: The Minor Character’s Work Toggle
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- Week 20: The Minor Character’s Work
- Aside from deciding about protagonists and antagonists, decide if your story also contains a Helper character. A Guide. Is one a Trickster, one a Fool?
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- Week 21: Beginning with What Someone Else Has To Say Toggle
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- Week 21: Beginning with What Someone Else Has To Say
- Equal time must be given to all your characters to create a true-to-life piece of fiction.
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- Week 22: Where Action Conveys a Thought Toggle
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- Week 22: Where Action Conveys a Thought
- Thoughts, narrations, actions, and motivations need to be intermixed in storytelling. We don’t always write like this, but for a more realistic story, we should.
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- Week 23: Going Beyond Gut Wrenching Emotion Toggle
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- Week 23: Going Beyond Gut Wrenching Emotion
- Try reaching down and underneath, where the sense memories are. Bring up something with emotion. Not just detailing something emotional.
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- Week 24: Start It Up Toggle
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- Week 24: Start It Up
- If you don’t limber up by planning your work in some way you can end up short of what you think is a finished piece.
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- Week 25: Character Role Call Toggle
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- Week 25: Character Role Call
- Knowing that 'something' that your characters stand for, right from the start of your effort, makes you a writer with a plan.
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- Week 26: Short Stories and Endings Toggle
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- Week 26: Short Stories and Endings
- The difference in where you end your story is Plot vs. Premise. A premise is a "What if" question. Plot shows motivations and outcomes.
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- Week 27: From Fancy to Precise Toggle
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- Week 27: From Fancy to Precise
- This lesson deals with adjectives, adverbs and precision. We'll learn the tricks to putting away the fancy, and finding the precise.
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- Week 28: More on Turning Work into Something Precise Toggle
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- Week 28: More on Turning Work into Something Precise
- Work for precision by trimming the ‘given’ from lines. Context of other lines usually fixes the need to report so much stuff to the reader.
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- Week 29: Changes To Make In Sentence Structure Toggle
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- Week 29: Changes To Make In Sentence Structure
- Try the task of taking your words from Telling to Showing by how you structure your story facts in their lines.
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- Week 30: Articles Vs. Pronouns Toggle
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- Week 30: Articles Vs. Pronouns
- These are the smallest of changes in edits you might consider, but they change your work in very strong ways.
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- Week 31: Mixing Up What is Doing and Done Toggle
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- Week 31: Mixing Up What is Doing and Done
- When the Doing and the Doer don’t agree a simple fix might be asking some questions about what you’re seeing in your mind.
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- Week 32: The Last Adverb Search Toggle
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- Week 32: The Last Adverb Search
- Some verbs might sound lame, off, plain, or boring. And instead of adverbial misdirection or camouflage we should be working to better our verb choices.
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- Week 33: Finding Your Characters Toggle
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- Week 33: Finding Your Characters
- However you wish to build your characters there are still steps to be taken to create characters that are "alive". Begin here.
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- Week 34: The Visceral, Physical and Visual Toggle
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- Week 34: The Visceral, Physical and Visual
- Whether you write a short story or a novel your words must work to get the visual, physical, and visceral on the page.
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- Week 35: Change in the Novel, Choice in the Short Story Toggle
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- Week 35: Change in the Novel, Choice in the Short Story
- Choice can be quiet, not always a large, dramatic thing. Chance only needs to come about, not to shout it is here.
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- Week 36: Making a Scene Toggle
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- Week 36: Making a Scene
- The goal of a really well realized scene is not using all your story notes, literally, in your writing. These are notes for your story – not your story itself.
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- Week 37: More Ways to Make a Scene Toggle
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- Week 37: More Ways to Make a Scene
- Setting can be a prop for the intention of a scene. It can reflect a character, her emotion, or the tone of a scene.
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- Week 38: 'Absolutely' Better Writing Toggle
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- Week 38: 'Absolutely' Better Writing
- Adding ‘Absolutes’ to your existing sentences move your work from telling into showing. That’s the main reason for adding words to a story.
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- Week 39: Fixing a Clunky Sentence Toggle
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- Week 39: Fixing a Clunky Sentence
- Capturing images seems easy enough, but trying, we fail most times. And we end up reading back clunky words that seem tongue-tied on the page.
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- Week 40: The Red Flag Quick Check List Toggle
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- Week 40: The Red Flag Quick Check List
- Remember: Not all problems need to be fixed right as you find them. You’re better off spotting things to change before making changes.
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- Week 41: Weeding Out the Un-needed Words Toggle
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- Week 41: Weeding Out the Un-needed Words
- Writing in weaker state-of-being verbs keeps us away from what we want to get across. Some usage works well. Too much short-changes your readers.
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- Week 42: Sentence Structure Toggle
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- Week 42: Sentence Structure
- Same sentence length and structure for three or more consecutive sentences is a sign that you might consider varying how you usually write your sentences.
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- Week 43: Metaphors and Similes Toggle
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- Week 43: Metaphors and Similes
- The best use of metaphor or simile is to illustrate something. Not, at the need of a line, to explain ‘how something is like’.
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- Week 44: Dramatic Tension in Memoirs Toggle
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- Week 44: Dramatic Tension in Memoirs
- But when we write memoir we have facts to stick to. And that can curtail our fashioning of dramatic tension.
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- Week 45: Standard Editing Questions Toggle
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- Week 45: Standard Editing Questions
- How to set up your manuscript pages, and then how to question what you have there on those pages for better edits.
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- Week 46: Dialogue on a Diet Toggle
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- Week 46: Dialogue on a Diet
- The intangible goal is to have Subtext via ‘Dialogue that’s there but not noticed by the characters’, yet it’s understood by the reader.
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- Week 47: Premise vs. Plot Toggle
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- Week 47: Premise vs. Plot
- A premise is an idea that asks, “What if…?” A plot is your answer to that first “What if?” question and any that follow.
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- Week 48: What Do You Plan On Writing? Toggle
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- Week 48: What Do You Plan On Writing?
- Having a plan about what to write gets you closer to beginning your story. With an outline or not, have some idea of where you’ll go.
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- Week 49: The Bane and Joys of Summary Narration Toggle
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- Week 49: The Bane and Joys of Summary Narration
- Summary Narration condenses story sections. Expand Summary Narration if you’re ‘telling too much’. Aim for a balance between telling vs. showing. Or action vs. summarization.
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- Week 50: Settings: Building Evocative Places Toggle
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- Week 50: Settings: Building Evocative Places
- Setting’s not simply the place where your character is while the story’s being told. Setting can reflect what your character is all about.
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- Week 51: Types of Stories to Tell Toggle
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- Week 51: Types of Stories to Tell
- Run an inventory of your works in progress – what type of story are you currently – or not – working on?
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- Week 52: You’ve Crossed the Bridge to Story Toggle
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- Week 52: You’ve Crossed the Bridge to Story
- You've made it through a year of weekly topics, learned ways of better writing, of less Reader-Feeder, of opening choices and manuscript formatting.
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